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▶While  it may be true that,…, the author 's argument does not make a cogent case for_____ 

▶In this argument , the author maintans that ______. To justify the conclusion________. 

▶Although at firt glance, it seems convincing that_____ 

▶It is easy to understand why____想做這件事______.Howeer, this argument is full of assumption and thus, not  strong enough to _做這件事__. 

▶It  failed to be complete compelling as it sound, for it contains a serious of unwarranted assumptions and due to the unfounded lack of evidence, and thus________ 

第一段 

▶First of all, the author reports__調查內容_. It is not clear, however, the scope and validity of that survey. For example, the survey could have______(問甚麼內容、字數過長), which may have cause ____甚麼問題______.And it may not be well representive. 

▶The survey may have been____第二個問題____, 可能造成什麼原因. 提出survey 可能的disadvantages. Unless the author(survey), is fully representative, valid, reliable, it can not be used to effectively back the author's argument 

▶Unless___________, or the author's argument   lack vital evidence to support the conclusion. 

第二段 

▶What's more, the author assumes that____更多flaws____. 

▶Additionally, the author implies that____, despite_______, because___文章中提到的原因_____ 

▶While__上述的原因可能___, a concrete evidence between____and_____is not effectivly made. 

▶While__上述的原因可能___, without offering the concrete evidence, the author could not back up the foundamental assumption. 

▶Though it is not rntirely possible ___作者提到的可能會發生___, but_______ 

▶再提更多flaws 

▶Though there have been_____, we just not know if there have been numerous complaints from a wide range of people, or perhaps______ 

▶建議方法   

▶To strengthen his/her argument, the author would benefit from implementing a normed survey asking a wide rage of residents why they doing____作者提到的問題___ 

第三段 

▶Building upon ____作者提到的第三個問題____due to _____, the author suggest that_______方法 will result in _作者想要的結果___. 

▶For example, 原因非作者所提，未能解決問題，因此不能達到作者想要的結果. 

▶Consequently,______may have no impact upon(on)_____ 

▶Regardless of whether__這件事可不可行___, the author does not effectively show a connection between_____and ____. 

▶For these reasons,______may decide to _______做這件事______. However, the author's argument is not likely significantly persuasive enough for ___EX投入更多資金____ 

總結 

▶To sum up, 做這件事很重要是可以理解的，因為有可能有上述的問題出現，可以怎麼做更好，如果真的要照作者說的做，可能需要更多的證據來顯示是值得的。